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Hello everyone!

This is my very first game and I honestly did not expect this many people to download it!

I'm really looking for your honest feedback/requests/points of improvement.

I warmly welcome reviews, but please explain your likes/dislikes, I'm new to all of this so I'm looking for ways to improve.

Thanks again and I hope you enjoy :)

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Very nice so far man. I enjoy the variety of options in dialogues and during the quest. The girl models primarily having their eyes closed is a bit off putting, same goes for the wooden mirror (I think?) that they are placed in during sex scenes. Overall though seems like you have a good foundation set up for what could be a great game. You got this!

Oh two more things I forgot. There are a couple options you aren't able to say due to charisma. First when meeting the twins and Matthew, and then second if you attempt to blackmail Barthold. The other thing, if you do not blackmail Barthold and only say, "you forgot my keys" the game presents this screen:

```

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:

  File "game/script.rpy", line 1372, in script

    jump ch1_first_home

ScriptError: could not find label 'ch1_first_home'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:

  File "game/script.rpy", line 1372, in script

    jump ch1_first_home

  File "D:\Itch\bound-by-fate\BoundbyFate-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1992, in execute

    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)

  File "D:\Itch\bound-by-fate\BoundbyFate-1.0-pc\renpy\script.py", line 1013, in lookup

    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))

ScriptError: could not find label 'ch1_first_home'.

Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64

Ren'Py 8.1.3.23091805

Bound by Fate 1.0

Sun Dec  3 19:02:58 2023

```

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Hi orangebanana3217, thank you so much for taking the time to reply! I really appreciate it! 

  • Sorry to hear about the error occurring, I'll fix that immediately with the next update.
  • I checked and there's a way to get the required charisma levels for the scenarios you described, best of luck! 
  • The wooden bars are meant to be a frame for a point-of-view scene, but duly noted that it looks a bit weird. 

Thanks again! Let me know if you want anything particular in the next update.